Developmental editing that feels supportive, honours your vision and helps your story shine

You’ve poured your heart into your book. Now you’re ready for honest, compassionate feedback that helps it land with the impact you know it’s capable of.

My editing services are crafted for writers who lead with heart and want support that feels like a creative partnership.

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Here’s why developmental editing is the secret ingredient to taking your book to the next level

Let’s be real—writing a novel is hard enough. Shaping it into something unforgettable? That’s where developmental editing comes in. Here’s how we make your book one that breaks your reader’s hearts in the best ways:

Deepen your characters so readers feel them
We want characters who linger in your readers’ minds. Let’s make sure your MC isn’t just doing things—they’re making people feel things.

Balance plot structure and pacing like a pro
Whether you’re writing slow burn or fast-paced fantasy, we’ll smooth out the bumps and make sure your story flows just right (no whiplash, no yawns).

Build tension and conflict that keeps readers up ‘til 3am
We’ll dial up the stakes and let that delicious slow burn simmer until it finally explodes. Mwah.

Clarify your core theme so your story hits deep
Not sure if it all ties together? Don’t stress—developmental editing helps you weave meaning through every chapter.

Unlock your authentic voice and storytelling style
This is about amplifying you, not turning your book into something it’s not. Your humour, your heart, your magic—front and centre.

Craft flirty, dynamic dialogue that sparkles
Let’s bring out the banter, the tension, the voice that makes your characters leap off the page and into your readers' hearts.

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All too Well (10min Version)

The Full Developmental Edit

Relax while I dive into your novel and provide a comprehensive read through of your manuscript addressing big picture elements like plots, characters and pacing.

What’s included:

  • Comprehensive in-line comments and chapter feedback via tracked changes in word.

  • Constructive feedback designed to build connection with your reader.

  • Praise for what is working in your story. 

  • Resources and education to deepen the story.

  • Full manuscript assessment (8 plus page).

  • 75 min call post edit to discuss any questions

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Manuscript Assessment

You’ll receive a comprehensive 12-15 page document filled with actionable insights to help take your novel to the next level & chapter feedback.

Here’s what’s inside:

  • What’s Working: Clear highlights of the strengths in your story—characters, themes, emotional impact, and more.

  • Areas for Improvement: Specific feedback on what could be refined, with examples to guide you in making revisions.

  • Resources & Next Steps: Tailored suggestions, tools, and resources to help you strengthen key areas of your manuscript, from plot structure to character arcs.

  • Chapter feedback

  • 75 min call post edit for feedback

This assessment is designed to empower you to make your novel the best version of itself—without losing the magic you’ve created.

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Reader Report

For the author getting ready to query.

Not ready for a full developmental edit—but need expert eyes on your manuscript before querying or diving into revisions?

Reader Reports are designed to give you clear, actionable feedback on what’s working, what’s not, and where to focus your energy next.

What’s Included

You’ll receive a 5-page Reader Report covering:

  • Overall reading experience – how the story lands emotionally and structurally

  • Strengths to protect – what’s working and should not be over-edited

  • Plot & pacing insights – where the story drags, rushes, or loses momentum

  • Character clarity & connection – emotional depth, motivation, and consistency

  • Theme & stakes – what’s coming through clearly and what needs sharpening

  • Revision priorities – a focused roadmap so you know what to tackle first

  • 30-minute follow-up call

This report is NOT a developmental edit. However it will offer you the tools needed to confidently query your novel or dive into revisions.

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Maria Lenihan

I absolutely loved working with Victoria. Her scene-level feedback is particularly insightful, calling out places that need more "showing", more tension, visuals, or interiority. Whatever is missing she sees it and tells you so that you can get the scene to the next level.

A Huber

Victoria’s feedback was amazing and considerate. She understood the novel's intention of exploring a marriage, it's ups and downs, and that pivotal moment when two people are on the cusp of making monumental decisions about their future. I can't thank her enough for the encouragement and the confidence to tackle this piece to make it even better

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Need support with your story, clarity on your next steps, or a creative pep talk with someone who gets it?

This isn’t a sales pitch. It’s a cozy, no-pressure coffee chat to see if we’re a good fit for your story.

I believe your story chooses the editor.

Whether you’re looking for editing that gets your vision or coaching that meets you where you are, this call is your space to ask questions, get clarity, and feel out the vibe.

We’ll talk about where you’re at, what kind of support you’re craving, and how I can help you bring your story (and creativity) to life.

Come as you are, coffee in hand. I’ll bring the cozy vibes and honest insight.

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We’ll go to together like Lorelai & coffee if:

  • You have a finished draft in one of my specialized genres: romance, historical, fantasy, or contemporary fiction.

  • You are looking for an editor who will hype you up & honour your novels vision.

  • You are ready to receive supportive feedback that will help take your novel to the next level.

FAQs

  • To get the most value you need a finished manuscript. Some authors book right after they finish the draft. Others wait until they've done a few rounds of self edits. 

  • Like all art developmental editing is also subjective. My goal with your novel is to maintain the integrity and authenticity of your voice. I look at the big picture of the story from the perspective of a reader. Do the characters feel flat? Are there plot holes? How is the pacing? Is there too much telling etc?

    From there I'll offer suggestions/ examples based on the mechanics of storytelling to help you make the story SHINE.

  • Yes! Pay in full or payment plans are available.

    $100 secures your space and we can split the remainder into two or three payments.

  • I do not correct grammar and spelling. Developmental editing looks at the BIG picture elements of your story. 
    Booking a line, copy and proofreader would be recommended.

  • Sorry that is out of scope. I can help you make sure your chosen genre fits into what is selling. Though that doesn't guarantee it will be picked up by an agent.

    Remember it's about the long game, Just become you get a no doesn't mean your novel is bad.